How can I make this poem better? I feel like I sound like a 12 year old..

For context, I am deeply in love. My partner is also deeply in love with me. Can this be edited to not sound childish in areas? Thoughts my literature folk?! TIA

PARTNERS NAME , The depth of my love for you surpasses that of the ocean, Raw and unfiltered emotion

Like unwavering trees, the trunks so sturdy, I so badly want to make this journey

For our love is unlike any I’ve ever known, spunky and fun and never too grown

Like blossoming flowers, dancing in the spring wind , I will dance with you until the mornings end

Our love is playful, yet our love is deep, our love is something that we are bound keep

Like the snow gently falling , kissing the earths solid rock, I promise to be gentle and kind for our eternal transcendental clock

I find myself bigger and better with you. Happier , more fun, and sillier too. You add to me , and I add to you. So let’s cherish this day, this moment, and just enjoy the view